tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3466013735184312288.post5959490518199814907..comments2023-11-02T16:38:53.380+05:30Comments on Sour Canvas: RainUjjwalRaajhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08701431415717010561noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3466013735184312288.post-7192971117554674392010-09-02T16:04:07.320+05:302010-09-02T16:04:07.320+05:30@Nilanjana : Thank you so much! I agree with what ...@Nilanjana : Thank you so much! I agree with what you've said, but I never really tried at all, like most of my poems, the lines hit me at different times. :)<br /><br />@Dishari: That's a huge huge compliment!! I haven't got one like that in a long time now! Thank you.<br /><br />@priyanka : Thank you soo much, it's not about being immature, it's about a particular kind of writing that you like and don't. I hate Stephanie meyer, but a lot of people love her LOL.<br /><br />I'd love it if you read more! :)UjjwalRaajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08701431415717010561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3466013735184312288.post-12276103040032139732010-09-01T20:51:59.499+05:302010-09-01T20:51:59.499+05:30Hey! its quite nice. I really enjoyed it, the seco...Hey! its quite nice. I really enjoyed it, the second and last stanza especially. I'm surprised i liked it! I dont like poems that dont rhyme. Call me immature, but whatever, thats just the way it it. But your poem! Waah! :)<br />According to everyone else, this isnt your best. Cant comment on that, since I havent really read too much of your work...but i do look forward to reading more of your writings now!PeaBeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08206104694247910074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3466013735184312288.post-67313427081368658412010-09-01T15:44:43.241+05:302010-09-01T15:44:43.241+05:30I'm not going to say *not your best* cause we&...I'm not going to say *not your best* cause we've already established that. But nonetheless, whatever you write, does things to me. :) It stays with me way after I've read it, and as a writer, that means you've succeededDisguisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12133584105497866558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3466013735184312288.post-45838088246903346762010-09-01T08:52:45.594+05:302010-09-01T08:52:45.594+05:30I agree, this one's surely not one of your bes...I agree, this one's surely not one of your bests..<br />Few stanzas inbetween were beautifully described, but few of them sounded amateur. The first stanza felt like there was too much effort for the rhyming scheme. <br />It was a mix and match. All in all, not one of the bests. You've done much better work.<br /><br />But, nevertheless, good work. Good work. I'm glad you posted it.nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3466013735184312288.post-21450266326209604532010-09-01T02:00:48.349+05:302010-09-01T02:00:48.349+05:30@Kanika : The last stanza I've used in another...@Kanika : The last stanza I've used in another poem of mine,one of my first ones....come to think of it, the last stanza was probably the first piece of poetry I ever did ! =D<br /><br />@Uma Ma'am : Yes, I shall, thank you!<br /><br />@Dipti...or is it diptee? :\<br /><br />Haha, No we don't, I have the privilege of being in an all boys institution. But Nilanjana and Dishari are very good friends of mine. We stay very close by. Same neighbourhood lol. <br /><br />And thank you sooooo much!<br /><br />Are you always awake at odd hours? xPUjjwalRaajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08701431415717010561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3466013735184312288.post-42487988017061605742010-09-01T01:08:27.430+05:302010-09-01T01:08:27.430+05:30wow..which school do you guys go to !? are you, Ni...wow..which school do you guys go to !? are you, Nil and Dish in the same one? all of you are so talented and amazing with words.<br />☺Killer Dramahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12113450179132793413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3466013735184312288.post-76971823447703990242010-09-01T00:41:10.563+05:302010-09-01T00:41:10.563+05:30creating is an elixir in itself ...pl mail it to m...creating is an elixir in itself ...pl mail it to me....awesome...love the imagery that goes back into myth moods...bless you...thanks for sharing....uma nairnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3466013735184312288.post-66057638425919612622010-09-01T00:30:27.184+05:302010-09-01T00:30:27.184+05:30I love the last stanza. Somehow I feel it too.
Not...I love the last stanza. Somehow I feel it too.<br />Not your best, I must agree. But I;m glad you thought of telling me you wrote it, because I remember you talking to me about how you planned to write something about the rain.<br />You can do better, Sen. Awesome nevertheless.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09633396022346388859noreply@blogger.com